tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post3131338540714276642..comments2024-03-24T18:43:21.700-05:00Comments on Forgetfulone: Desire (For Writer's Island)Forgetfulonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07895803172098820967noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-73582944560723717922008-04-20T00:23:00.000-05:002008-04-20T00:23:00.000-05:00Impressive!Impressive!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-41388193986458735872008-01-31T09:50:00.000-06:002008-01-31T09:50:00.000-06:00this is so intense and well written! except for t...this is so intense and well written! <BR/>except for the part about longing... I am feeling the other symptoms from my awful head cold! :)Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-40045358021775115562008-01-30T21:21:00.000-06:002008-01-30T21:21:00.000-06:00It's been a long time for me, but I think you've c...It's been a long time for me, but I think you've correctly defined desire - or at least its immediate symptoms! Really nice work!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-3708557577865146352008-01-30T17:26:00.000-06:002008-01-30T17:26:00.000-06:00lovely...truly, lovely!lovely...truly, lovely!Mamarazzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11053091142306052509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-84816422324209712762008-01-30T15:39:00.000-06:002008-01-30T15:39:00.000-06:00Loved the poem. I agree with Kellan, its soothing ...Loved the poem. I agree with Kellan, its soothing and panicky.<BR/><BR/>Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-91918796932678363772008-01-30T11:32:00.000-06:002008-01-30T11:32:00.000-06:00Very nice poem - sounds like it could be soothing ...Very nice poem - sounds like it could be soothing or panicky - I hope it is soothing for your. Take care - KellanKellanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07882991320065439298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-50181587986242584742008-01-30T10:35:00.000-06:002008-01-30T10:35:00.000-06:00Very good use of words. It almost makes me warm o...Very good use of words. It almost makes me warm on this very cold morning. =)Evehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11072209113562315120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19855347.post-40358537708116557572008-01-30T02:43:00.000-06:002008-01-30T02:43:00.000-06:00a tangible longing at the core of my sould. What a...a tangible longing at the core of my sould. What a beautiful line and a desirable poem. ThanksMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.com